"Whenever social pundits try to explain why glam metal died, they usually insist that "It wasn't real," or that "It didn't say anything." Well, it was certainly real to me and all my friends. And more importantly, to did say something.
It said something to us(5)."
I know this is short but I choose it because it is a conclusion. I think my biggest problem with essays are my conclusions. I feel like I babble on without really knowing what to talk about because I've already talked about it in the body of my essays. Here, the conclusion is short and sweet. It gets the point across without adding too much redundant information. It states the purpose of the essay (or chapter); metal rock was real and it said something. I will definitely keep in mind that conclusions are best when they are short, and clearly state the purpose of the essay.
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